5 How to Write For Results 5.9 Getting Lewd (in progress)
neckline barely covers anything as she laughs and giggles at all of Anon’s jokes. Just
take the remember pin advice from earlier, and make it lewder, especially as a sex scene
starts to unfold.
5.9.4 Writing a Good Sex Scene
Writing a good sex scene with the AI requires all the skills you learned about above in
the general writing guide, and for you to do one very, very important thing: slow the
scene down.
See, you can really get the AI to get the hint and just start gobbling your cock with
a bit of
Story
magic, but a good sex scene has tension, buildup, and creativity. The AI
(like you) has a “hair trigger” for sex, and likes to describe an action or two, cum, and
then Count Grey stabs you in the chest. But that’s not hot, nor is it satisfying to you.
Though it may read like ill-informed smut, start with irting and foreplay with the
AI. Treat it like you would a partner, or how your character would treat said AI in your
given setting. Using a mix of
Story
and
Do
inputs, write carefully that you notice his
or her World Info relevant sexual characteristics. So instead of just hugging Stacy, you:
Story
You press your body up against Stacy’s wrapping your arms around her
athletic frame. You can feel her heavy breasts squeezed up against your chest, and
you’re ashamed to admit that you’re starting to feel a little turned on.
What I’ve done in the above example is highlight a few key scene details that signal to
the AI that you’re feeling frisky, or want to do a secks with Stacy. Then the AI will spit
out a response on Stacy’s behalf, and you roll from there, maybe using a
Do
to pinch
Stacy’s butt playfully or something and try to move things along.
You get the idea. Draw. Out. Everything. And that includes the actual fucking too,
and this is where you need to get creative and make heavy use of the editing tool, because
like I said, the AI likes to cum quick and won’t even cuddle aftwards. How do you deal
with this?
First, you need to dig deep into the shallow well of your creativity and nd the naughty
bits that you can use to describe sensory details. Put into
Story
the smell of sweat, the
feel of her pussy engulng your cock, the sounds you and Stacy are making, etc. Then
use
Do
to start moving things around, slap her ass, pull her hair, etc, but fucking
DESCRIBE everything. So if you use
Do
to spank Stacy, write some stu in
Do
about
how her ass jiggles when your palm snaps o it, how you hit her so hard that your palm
actually hurts. That might look like this:
Do
Pull my arm all the way back and wind up, and then, right as I feel Stacy’s
tight pussy start to contract and convulse around my cock in orgasm, spank Stacy
ass red.
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